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"It all started yesterday morning It was a good day to begin with. Me and Teddy had a successful sofa exploring expedition and had found an old piece of string and a very nice biro lid to present to Otter Keeper when he got home from work. We were exhausted and had just settled down to watch some daytime TV when I realised my crayon was nowhere to be seen. Me and Teddy searched all day (he didnt put much effort in) but we couldnt find it.
When Otter Keeper got home he found my crayon but I was still sad because me and Teddy had really wanted to do some colouring in that day. Otter Keeper explained how you must look after things that are important to you and if you have something REALLY important (like a pound, or a favourite crayon) you should stick with it for life.
The next day Otter Keeper was at work again and me and Teddy began discussing what he had told us. We were both very worried about loosing more things that were important to us so Teddy hit on a brilliant idea. We decided to take Otter Keepers advice and stick together with the things that were important to us in life and luckily last week we discovered where Otter Keeper kept the special glue (Im not allowed to play with this but this was important)
It was hard deciding which were my most important things. I stuck myself to my ball and my crayon but then Teddy pointed out that he was very important, so I stuck him to me too. After a while of thinking I suddenly realised what the most important thing in the world that I didnt ever want to loose was OTTER KEEPER. As soon as he arrived home and got through the door I ran up and stuck myself to him I didnt even say hello the fear of loosing him was too great at this point.
However today has ended a bit sad. Keeper is very cross and I am very confused. I did exactly what he had taught me but apparently he didnt mean it like that. I dont see what the problem is .. being stuck to Otter Keeper is great fun, and I always know where he is which is handy. Sadly it turns out sticking yourself to Otter Keepers is not allowed and he is trying to detach me, Ive explained to him I might loose him if he does this but he doesnt seem too worried.
Well me and Teddy are sticking together no matter what happens! (hide and seek may not be as much fun but he was always rubbish at that anyway). "
I laughed when I saw this image. It's cute and completely something that Otter would do!
The shading is really nice, and I like the way the green from Otter Keeper's jumper is reflected on his trousers too.
I love the way you draw these characters. The Otter Keeper always looks suitably scruffy, especially with his hair. Otter looks so sad from where she is stuck to his leg.
The expressions are spot on and you've conveyed the emotion in this piece really well.
Overall a really well drawn piece that really conveys everything from Otter's story in your comments in a visual way! You don't even need to read the comment to understand what's happened, which is brilliant!
The shading is really nice, and I like the way the green from Otter Keeper's jumper is reflected on his trousers too.
I love the way you draw these characters. The Otter Keeper always looks suitably scruffy, especially with his hair. Otter looks so sad from where she is stuck to his leg.
The expressions are spot on and you've conveyed the emotion in this piece really well.
Overall a really well drawn piece that really conveys everything from Otter's story in your comments in a visual way! You don't even need to read the comment to understand what's happened, which is brilliant!
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